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daughter_of_kings
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by daughter_of_kings » Fri Aug 12, 2005 5:20 am
Silivren Ithildin wrote:Deep within your eyes
many things look back at me.
Great beginning!
Silivren Ithildin wrote:and with the journey's end
you were free to be you again.
Lovely ending! And everything in between was well done, too.
If the grass is always greener on the other side of the fence... water your grass.
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Silivren Ithildin
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by Silivren Ithildin » Fri Aug 12, 2005 7:25 am
I really appreciate those very kind words.
I am glad that others understand my obsession with eyes!!!!!
Sil
And Aragorn gave it a new name and called it Anduril, Flame of the West. FOTR
"Utúlie'n aurë! Auta i lómë!"
The Children of Húrin
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ArwenGermany
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by ArwenGermany » Sun Aug 14, 2005 10:13 am
Awww...what a wonderful poem my dear !
The way you put you thoughts into words is amazing and inspiring !
Great job !
AG
Nai tiruvantel ar varyuvantel i Valar tielyanna nu vilya.
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Silivren Ithildin
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by Silivren Ithildin » Tue Aug 16, 2005 7:37 am
I'm glad you liked it!
Inspiring?
Sil
And Aragorn gave it a new name and called it Anduril, Flame of the West. FOTR
"Utúlie'n aurë! Auta i lómë!"
The Children of Húrin
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agape4rivendell
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by agape4rivendell » Wed Aug 17, 2005 6:30 pm
I very much liked the stages, Sil. Very nice job.
Agape
'There will be only one Steward in Gondor, so long as I am King. I will have you as my Steward, or I will have none." PlasticChevy - The Captain and the King
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Silivren Ithildin
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by Silivren Ithildin » Thu Aug 18, 2005 6:48 am
I really appreciate it!
Sil
And Aragorn gave it a new name and called it Anduril, Flame of the West. FOTR
"Utúlie'n aurë! Auta i lómë!"
The Children of Húrin