Legolas' Eyes....A poem

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Re: Legolas' Eyes....A poem

Post by daughter_of_kings » Fri Aug 12, 2005 5:20 am

Silivren Ithildin wrote:Deep within your eyes
many things look back at me.
Great beginning!
Silivren Ithildin wrote:and with the journey's end
you were free to be you again.
Lovely ending! And everything in between was well done, too. :clap:
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Thank you so much (((daughter_of_kings))) tx

Post by Silivren Ithildin » Fri Aug 12, 2005 7:25 am

I really appreciate those very kind words.

I am glad that others understand my obsession with eyes!!!!! :oops:

Sil :grin:
And Aragorn gave it a new name and called it Anduril, Flame of the West. FOTR

"Utúlie'n aurë! Auta i lómë!"
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Re: Thank you so much (((daughter_of_kings))) tx

Post by ArwenGermany » Sun Aug 14, 2005 10:13 am

Awww...what a wonderful poem my dear !
The way you put you thoughts into words is amazing and inspiring !

Great job ! :thumb:


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Nai tiruvantel ar varyuvantel i Valar tielyanna nu vilya.
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Thank you, (((AG)))!!! tx

Post by Silivren Ithildin » Tue Aug 16, 2005 7:37 am

I'm glad you liked it!

Inspiring? :oops:

Sil :shock:
And Aragorn gave it a new name and called it Anduril, Flame of the West. FOTR

"Utúlie'n aurë! Auta i lómë!"
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Re: Legolas' Eyes....A poem - Stages

Post by agape4rivendell » Wed Aug 17, 2005 6:30 pm

I very much liked the stages, Sil. Very nice job.

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Thank you so kindly, (((agape)))!!!...tx

Post by Silivren Ithildin » Thu Aug 18, 2005 6:48 am

I really appreciate it!

Sil :grin:
And Aragorn gave it a new name and called it Anduril, Flame of the West. FOTR

"Utúlie'n aurë! Auta i lómë!"
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