Broken bonds...

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Indis
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Broken bonds...

Post by Indis » Tue Aug 23, 2005 11:53 am

Broken bonds
No more hope, this time.
Gone. Lost. Done.
The ship is but a reflection on a sea of silver,
My eyes are dry now,
And all I see is the long way home,
Without you.
Walking on every road,
Without you.
Meeting friends,
Without you.
Emptying my cup, my glass, my heart,
Without you.
Suffering memories,
Without you.
Being lost,
Without you.
Future,
Without you.
Laughing,
Without you.
Crying,
For you.
Out of doubt, out of dark to the day's rising...
J.R.R. Tolkien, RotK
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Re: Broken bonds...

Post by Silivren Ithildin » Tue Aug 23, 2005 2:59 pm

*sniffles* Poor Sam!!! All alone, without Frodo!

Such a sad poem, Indis! Wonderful job!

Sil :(
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Fair and sorrowful...

Post by Elvellon Ringsbane » Tue Aug 23, 2005 4:27 pm

Beautiful, Indis. A simple, pure, poignant verse.
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Re: Broken bonds...

Post by Overlithe64 » Tue Aug 23, 2005 5:59 pm

Oh... :cry: ...poor Sam. But is the bond broken or just Sams heart? :comfort: The poor dear...I'm sure it would have been harder for Sam going back to an enviorment where Frodo wasn't as opposed to Frodo being in a strange land where his friends never were.

Beautiful reminder of the pain that everyday things could bring... :thatsmile:
At the last moment he turned back, it was Frodo the darkness and pain were gone...
His healing had begun.
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Re: Broken bonds...txt

Post by daisy gold » Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:59 am

sniffles :cry: That is so beautiful and so sad all at the same time.
((( dear Sam))) :hug:
A wonderful poem Indis :D :yay:
He beheld white shores and beyond them a far green country under a swift sunrise.
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*sniffles*...txt

Post by Dínelleth » Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:26 am

Oh my that was so touching!!! Poor Sam!!! :sad:
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Aww! (txt)

Post by Queen of Gondor » Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:29 am

*sniffles* Wonderful poem, but how sad! Poor Sam! :cry:

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Aaaww... that's lovely (((((Indis)))))) *tear* ...nt

Post by Evermind » Thu Aug 25, 2005 12:10 am

Aaaww... that's lovely (((((Indis)))))) *tear*
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So sad!...

Post by Primula » Fri Aug 26, 2005 5:53 pm

This is just heartbreaking, Indis - anyone who has ever grieved for the loss of a loved one hears what you are saying.

(((Indis))) - and wow...I think this is your first poem, isn't it? I hope there will be more to follow.
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Re: So sad!...

Post by ArwenGermany » Sun Aug 28, 2005 12:11 pm

Wow, this is a truely beautiful poem ! It brought tears into my eyes :cry:



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Re: Broken bonds... reminds me of a certain airport

Post by agape4rivendell » Sun Aug 28, 2005 7:24 pm

Oh dearest Indis,

Beautiful, stunning poem. Absolutely stunning!

I too am 'without you!' :cry:

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Re: Broken bonds...

Post by BiddyBaggins » Thu Sep 01, 2005 12:08 pm

Oh that was beautiful. :yay: I really like this :D x
All will turn to silver glass
A light on the water
Grey Ships pass
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Indis
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Re: So sad!...

Post by Indis » Sat Sep 03, 2005 2:40 pm

Primula wrote:This is just heartbreaking, Indis - anyone who has ever grieved for the loss of a loved one hears what you are saying.

(((Indis))) - and wow...I think this is your first poem, isn't it? I hope there will be more to follow.
Thanks so much, everyone, for your lovely comments, I really appreciate them.
And yes, dear (((Prim))), this is indeed my very first poem, at least the first that I dare to show :oops: :shock: :pale:
Again, thanks a lot, friends :friends:
Out of doubt, out of dark to the day's rising...
J.R.R. Tolkien, RotK
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Re: So sad!...

Post by Rider_of_the_Rohirrim » Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:00 pm

That was beautiful Indis! Poor Sam!

I really hope to see some more of you're poems here! :wink:
Real world??? You mean there's a world outside of fantasy?!?!?!?! you must be nuts!!!!!!
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