Six word stories

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Re: Six word stories

Post by Primula » Thu Jan 02, 2014 10:34 am

Dang, these are hard. Six words is an awfully small box. Double meaning might wedge more in - such as here the waves unresting could be ocean tide or the memory of the hands of friends gesturing farewell. Hmmm. Needs more work.


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Re: Six word stories

Post by DoctorGamgee » Thu Jan 02, 2014 12:23 pm

Farmer Maggot's cheat: Lettuce entertain ewe.

Farmers hate Hobos: Lettuce not rutabaga.

Rutabaga and they'll turnip like Hobbits!


And for those less agriculturally minded:

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Re: Six word stories

Post by daughter_of_kings » Fri Jan 03, 2014 9:20 am

Te he he.

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Re: Six word stories

Post by Tari » Sun Jan 19, 2014 12:50 pm

I especially like the third on Dr. Gamgee.
:rofl:

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Re: Six word stories

Post by daughter_of_kings » Fri Feb 21, 2014 6:16 am

Equus: exercise program and mental healthcare.

or

Equus: Best friend on four hooves.


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Re: Six word stories

Post by DoctorGamgee » Fri Feb 21, 2014 11:45 am

Crazy Doctor Gamgee: Punishment fits sublime!

(Glad they made you giggle!)
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Re: Six word stories

Post by agape4rivendell » Sat Mar 08, 2014 9:50 pm

Remember when we thought drabbles were hard? :shock:
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