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Varda's Inkling 62; Let Us Be Friends Again

Post by Varda » Wed Aug 03, 2005 1:07 pm

If it is permitted, I am posting my next episode here, as Middle Earth is my home.... :-)



Boromir looked down at his sword, held ready to strike at Gimli if the Dwarf attacked him again. He gripped the weapon so tightly his knuckles were white…

The prince of Gondor shook his head in wonder and sorrow; had he really tried to kill Gimli? But Gimli had tried to kill him…..raising his arm slowly, as if in sleep, Boromir placed the sharp sword-tip in the scabbard and slid the pale blue steel into the black leather sheath. Then he looked up at Legolas and said in a low voice;
‘I have fought many orcs, Legolas Greenleaf, and men too, and slain them. Easterlings, men of Harad and others, half creature and half human. I know when I give the death-stroke, by spear or by sword. I know that I surely gave it to you….’

Boromir walked towards the Elf. Gimli stood to one side, eyeing the tall man suspiciously, fingering his axe, ready to spring to the defence of Legolas. The Elf stood silently, waiting for Boromir.

When the man reached him, he raised his hand to touch the Elf’s silver-grey tunic. From the flutter of movement in the corner of his eye Boromir knew the townspeople who had retreated to the walls during his battle with Gimli were watching intently. The hall was dim; soon, had the Dwarf not attacked him, the lamps would have been lit. But all the bustle and routine of the city had ceased while he stood face to face with Legolas. Time itself stood still…..

In the fading light, Boromir looked closely at the Elf‘s tunic. There, where he had stabbed Legolas, was a long jagged rent, stiff with dried blood. Boromir felt a thrill of superstitious fear. He touched the fabric with his fingers and felt the torn strands of the fine silk shirt underneath. But then, suddenly, Legolas gripped his hand and pulled it away.

Boromir started and tried to take his hand back, but the Elf held it tight, and his strength was beyond even that of the tall, battle-hardy prince of Gondor. Legolas’s hand was cold as ice, and looking down, Boromir saw that the bones were visible through the translucent skin. He looked up at Legolas’s face in horror…

The Elf gazed back into his eyes calmly, and for a moment Boromir thought he was looking into two deep, dark pools, so black and expressionless were the Elf’s eyes, that had once been grey and bright as stars. Legolas’s face too was pale, like the hue of the moon when it lingers above the horizon on a winter morning. Yet had Legolas lost none of his beauty. Then the Elf spoke;

‘Do not fear, Boromir. I am not a ghost. I still am Legolas, your companion of the Fellowship…‘
‘That cannot be…‘ replied Boromir, too low for any, even Gimli to hear.
‘I smote you hard, a killing stroke. None rise after taking such a blow of the sword….’
‘And yet I did!’ broke in Legolas. ‘I am alive, Boromir. You do not behold a wraith, although I know that is what you fear…‘

Boromir looked at Legolas in alarm.
‘Can you read men’s minds now too?’
But Legolas merely smiled sadly.
‘Boromir, anyone could read your mind at this moment…’

Boromir shook his head in bafflement. Then he asked;
‘Have you come to seek vengeance for my violence towards you…?‘

The Elf no longer smiled. He said;
‘I did not return from the edge of night to waste time seeking vengeance. Nothing of that matters to me any more. For what you did, I freely forgive you, Boromir….’

The man‘s shoulders sagged slightly, and a look of relief came over his face. Legolas nodded and smiled;
‘Now it is I…’ he said ‘..who must ask forgiveness. For I took on myself the vengeance that rightly belonged to another, Frodo, whether he desired it or not. For that presumption I have paid, but not with my life, not this time. Neither may you ever pay for any mistake with your blood. For now, in my eyes you are forgiven, if it is of any value to you. Forgive me in your turn…‘

Boromir was mystified.
‘Forgive you?’ he asked ‘Rightly gladly I would, but it is not required of you. Nothing is required of you, Legolas, save to live, and call me your friend once more. Do that, and all the swords and pikes of Mordor can come against us, and I will laugh at them….!‘

At these words, at last, Legolas smiled as he had smiled when Boromir knew him first, and a light like that on a winter lake shone on his fair, pale face. He said;
‘Once, long ago before one stone of your city was placed on another, the Elves and the men of Númenor were close in kinship and love. Let us two then be friends again, for as long as our blood runs in our veins.‘

Boromir laughed at these words, and throwing his arms round the Elf he crushed him to his chest with a bear-like embrace.
‘Right gladly I swear it shall be so…!‘ he cried. But he noticed that under his fine Elven garments, Legolas was cold as stone…

Boromir let the Elf go and asked, with a serious expression;
‘Legolas, in what realms did you linger when you seemed dead to us? What visions did you bring back…?‘

Legolas gazed for a long moment into the distance as if recalling something, then he held up his hand and said gravely;
‘I may not tell you that, not now or ever, my friend. Enough to tell you, that our doings and our words will echo in the lives of many who live after our time is over, even in ages worse than this one. Everything we do has such meaning…’
‘Strange tidings indeed!‘ said Boromir. ‘What do you counsel us to do, then?‘
Legolas replied with a strange smile; ‘I counsel that we do all we swore to do at the Council at Rivendell; to help Frodo reach his destination. After that….‘ Legolas here looked down at Gimli, waiting and listening with impatience. ‘…even the Elves cannot say…‘

‘Well!’ grumbled Gimli ‘If the Elves cannot say, then let the Dwarves say! We have spent too much time here in full view of every gawper in the city; let us away…‘

‘Where to?’ asked Boromir with a smile at Gimli’s impatience.
‘Well…’ said the Dwarf with an exaggerated sigh ‘..before I was waylaid by you two, I was on my way to see if Sam was any better. He took a sore hurt in protecting Lady Eowyn…’
At once Boromir’s face grew serious.
‘That is true. I was there! I too wish to visit Sam, Gimli, but I have been told that Frodo is with him…’

Boromir’s voice trailed off into silence; unspoken between them was the knowledge that it was better that Boromir and the Ringbearer were not brought face to face again….then Legolas put a hand on Boromir’s arm and said;
‘Come, Boromir. It makes no difference if Frodo is there or not. You will not betray your oath again…‘
Boromir said in disbelief;
‘Legolas, how do you know?‘
‘Man, I just know….‘ replied the Elf with a smile….

The lamps in the hall, newly lit, were casting a weak, yellow light as the three made their way to the door of the room where Sam lay, in the lower halls of the Houses of Healing. Shadows played tricks on the eye, and the lofty hall with its twisting stone staircase and columned alcoves seemed to whisper with hidden presences. Gimli glanced over his shoulder as if he felt someone behind them. But Boromir boldly laid a hand on the door, twisted the handle-ring, and went in. Gimli followed, and Legolas entered last. They stopped inside the room, staring round in horror and amazement……


After they ceased talking, Aragorn and Faramir stood in silence in the great Hall of Minas Tirith. The last light of evening was streaming through the high windows, shining on the marble floors and throwing into high relief the profiles of the stone statues of Kings and Stewards that lined the central aisle of the hall.

Faramir faced Aragorn, the man who was by right his king, and would have spoken again. He had many questions he wished to ask….. but just then came the rattle of the great oaken doors. Both men turned. The doors opened with a groan and a creak. In the archway, clear against the evening sun, stood Gandalf, the Wizard, supported by a slight figure in the dark livery of an archer of Gondor….

Aragorn turned from Faramir and walked slowly towards the door. The light for a moment dazzled him, and he raised a hand to shade his eyes. He wondered did his senses play tricks on him; Gandalf had fallen in Moria, slain by the Balrog who dragged him with it to his death. This could not be him. But the figure shuffled forward, leaning on the arm of the archer, and the doors swung shut behind and when the afterglow of the sunlight faded from his eyes Aragorn saw clearly that it was indeed Gandalf.

He walked up to the Wizard, astonishment on his face. Gandalf smiled at him and nodded, and the man reached out and touched the wizard’s robes, once grey, then white, now faded like funeral weeds of one long dead. Neither grey nor white, but threadbare and ragged, with the light streaming through them as if through strands of cobwebs in a tomb suddenly broken open to the day…. Faramir came up behind Aragorn, who at last managed to say;
‘I saw you fall, Mithrandir….I saw you die..’

Gandalf stood up as straight as he could, and lifting his hand from the archer’s shoulder he nodded at Cathach, who stepped away. Then Gandalf smiled again at Aragorn and replied;
‘I have come back, Estel, for my task is not done. I was not slain in Moria, but suffered transformation. I was reborn as a White Wizard, greater by far than than my old self. I was sent back to complete my errand on earth. …’

Gandalf‘s smile faded. He went on;
‘…but, misled by pity, I have acted unwisely, it seems, and my power has been taken from me again. Perhaps for a little while, perhaps for all time if I am judged unworthy. I am no longer Gandalf the White, but returned to Grey, or even Gandalf without any colour at all…..’

At this Gandalf glanced at Faramir, who bowed his head with a sigh. The Wizard said;
‘Do not grieve, Faramir, that it happened on your account. Wizards are wiser than men, and my decision was right in my eyes, even at such a cost….‘

But Aragorn could restrain himself no longer; he rushed forward and embraced the wizard.
‘Gandalf, my old friend, it IS you! What do I care what colour your garments are? For all my lineage I would be nothing but a forest kern without your guidance and trust. If I am worthy to be a king, it is your doing! More than a father to me, welcome back, Mithrandir!’

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Re: Varda's Inkling 62; Let Us Be Friends Again

Post by Linaewen » Wed Aug 03, 2005 1:34 pm

Oh! That made me cry! I shall have to come back with better comments after I compose myself. *sniffle*

This is what got me the most:

Forgive you?’ he asked ‘Rightly gladly I would, but it is not required of you. Nothing is required of you, Legolas, save to live, and call me your friend once more. Do that, and all the swords and pikes of Mordor can come against us, and I will laugh at them….!‘
*double sniffle*
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Re: a wonderful chapter txt

Post by daisy gold » Wed Aug 03, 2005 3:01 pm

Oh!!! What a wonderful chapter, Varda. :yay: :yay: :yay:
So many old friends meeting up again. :friends:

Your descriptions are so beautiful, so poetic....
Legolas’s face too was pale, like the hue of the moon when it lingers above the horizon on a winter morning
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Terrific Varda :D
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Middle-Earth wouldn't be the same without your tales, V. txt

Post by Avondster » Wed Aug 03, 2005 3:56 pm

And I'm so glad you're here!

I re-read chapters 59-61 in the scrapbook first when I saw this... oh, such a brilliant storyteller you are, V, I can't tell you enough!

Boromir's speech to Legolas made me sniffle, but I love to see them all reunited again! But... what happened to all the others? Frodo and Sam? Merry and Pippin? *feels anxious*

*hugs you randomly*
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BRAVA!!!!! Breathe... txt

Post by Ladyhawk Baggins » Wed Aug 03, 2005 5:27 pm

I've got to learn to remember to breathe when reading your tales. The exchange between Legolas and Boromir was wonderful, and it is sooooo good to see them all on the same side once more, though I fear for dear Frodo and Sam. And indeed, where are Merry and Pippin? :shock: :yay:
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*applause* txt

Post by Primula » Wed Aug 03, 2005 5:59 pm

Well woven once again - even though I am troubled by the zombie-like aspects of death that are still hanging about Legolas, even after all he went through. :shock: And it looks like Frodo and Sam will not get much lead-time, if they've been discovered already. Still hoping for a restoration for Gandalf as well as Legolas - but in the hands of one who is not afraid of angst, I have no idea where you may in fact be going.

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Re: Varda's Inkling 62; Let Us Be Friends Again

Post by agape4rivendell » Wed Aug 03, 2005 8:01 pm

It is incredibly good to see this tale here, Varda. Thank you.

And an incredible chapter it was too. Dearest Boromir.... I don't have words....

And Sam and Frodo - rescue them soon - please!!!!

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Re: Varda's Inkling 62; Let Us Be Friends Again

Post by agape4rivendell » Wed Aug 03, 2005 8:02 pm

Yes, yes, yes, Lin - that was my favorite too - thank you for pointing it out!

ooooooohhhh

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Re: Varda's Inkling 62; Let Us Be Friends Again

Post by Vik » Wed Aug 03, 2005 10:47 pm

:yay:
Awesome chapter, Varda! Like the others I found the dialogue between Boromir and Legolas very touching.
I also liked this:
But Aragorn could restrain himself no longer; he rushed forward and embraced the wizard.
‘Gandalf, my old friend, it IS you! What do I care what colour your garments are? For all my lineage I would be nothing but a forest kern without your guidance and trust. If I am worthy to be a king, it is your doing! More than a father to me, welcome back, Mithrandir!’

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Darling V! Have I ever told you just how much I love you? nt

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Darling V! Have I ever told you just how much I love you? :grin:
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Post by faramirgirl » Thu Aug 04, 2005 11:09 am

Varda it is so good to be reading your stories again. This is a wonderful chapter. Legolas is alive and has forgiven Boromir. I am so looking forward to be reading the rest of this story. I have missed ths story so much. :D
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Re: Darling V! Have I ever told you just how much I love you

Post by Varda » Thu Aug 04, 2005 11:57 am

Well, my dear Evermind, me too... :oops:

Thanks, Faramirgirl, I hope to go on with it more quickly from now on
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Thanks, Vik, for following me here :wink: the new smilies are great, aren't they? A bit too tempting, perhaps....

Thanks, Agape, I am doing my best to do right by Bor. His real test is coming soon.... :|

Thanks, Prim, for letting me post here. It is the only board I really want to write for. 8)

Sam and Frodo have taken a back seat in this story, as it was really meant to be about the Fellowship and how they would have reacted had Boromir's attempt to take the Ring succeeded. how they would all have behaved, or changed. Frodo was really just the catalyst.

Don't worry, Ladyhawk, I am not forgetting Merry and Pippin. But they are actually at next morning, and I have to bring the others up to them :oops: bad scripting, sigh.

Many thanks, Avondster. And I hope you will write for this board too, some new angst-wrung inkling? :shock:

Thanks, Daisy. I see you too have shed a bit of unwanted hardware, the hyphen. We are all feeling a lot lighter :wink:

And thanks, Lin, for giving me the push to go on ;)

Thanks, everyone....

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At last I am reading this! Fabulous chapter ((V)) as ever nt

Post by Fan Forever » Fri Aug 05, 2005 2:24 pm

:wave:

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Re: At last I am reading this! Fabulous chapter ((V)) as eve

Post by Varda » Fri Aug 05, 2005 11:48 pm

Many thanks, Fan!

and so glad you made it to the new site!
Welcome, welcome....
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Re: Varda's Inkling 62; Let Us Be Friends Again

Post by Durin_the_Deathless » Mon Aug 08, 2005 11:43 am

Another great chapter :thumb: :clap:

it's surprising that they are all in the same city (and soon, it appears, to be on the same level) and they have all not reunited! c'mon! Varda! stop torturing us!! :eyepopping: :whack: :eek:
The shadow lies upon his tomb,
in Moria, in Khazad-dûm.
But still the sunken starrs appear,
in dark and windless mirrormere.
There lies his crown in water deep,
till Durin wakes again from sleep.

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